Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 8, 2020
Jaguars by Luca Baylis
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi Luca,
ReplyDeleteWow what a lot of work you've done to learn and write about jaguars! I love the life cycle slide and well done for including a bibliography. Next time, perhaps keep the pictures smaller and background behind the words plain as it can make it clearer to read. Great effort!!
Wow Luca! What an awesome information report! I really love that you have researched all about the animal and presented it in a creative way. Did you know you can fade your background image so it isn't quite so bright, but is still visible. We can go over this if you like? Thank you for sharing your learning, my favourite part was your introduction, I think you really captured the audience with your words. Keep up the great posting :)
ReplyDeleteHi Luca,
ReplyDeleteVery cool report on a magnificent animal. You have followed the instructions very well. I can't wait to show this to the class :)
Great blog post Luca. Love the creatve work :)
ReplyDeletewow jaguars are cool
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